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Thursday, 21 January 2021

SLJ Week 6 Day 4 - That Was Summer Poem

Basically for this activity I made a poem based on summer. I expressed ''that was summer'' by using the 5 senses. Give it a read :D  


3 comments:

  1. Hi Uinita!

    Finau here. Well done on making and writing your poem. I really enjoyed your poem. My favourite part from your poem was "Remember watching people getting splashed at the beach" and "Remember the smell of the BBQ". The reasons why those were my favourite was because I did lots of those things during summer. I think that this poem talk heaps about summer. Keep up the great work Uinita.

    Quick question, are these all the things you like to do in the Summer? I bet it is.

    From Finau:)

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    1. Hi Finau,

      Thanks for commenting and mentioning you favorite parts from my poem! Also yes these are things I like to do in summer :)

      Uinita

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  2. Hey Uinita

    Great work on completing this task, You’ve done an awesome job over the summer.

    The Summer learning journey is now over and we’re calculating all the points to figure out our prize winners. Sorry that I don’t have time to leave a really detailed comment but I’m just here to let you know this post will be counted towards your points.

    Well done,
    Hope you have an awesome summer and stay safe.

    Daniel

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